Shelly had a plan. She wrote a letter so she wanted to get a sister. She got a mermaid sister.
By Ella
Shelly and Gordy went to the beach. Shelly had a new sister called Coral. Coral was a mermaid. Coral watched her own programme. She put salt in the bath and seaweed.
By Cole
Shelly went to the beach with Gordy and Gordy is a pain. Shelly put a bottle in the sea and it had a note in it. Then they met up and they had brothers and they lived together.
By Dyllan
Shelly and Gordy were brother and sister. Gordy was a pain in the patootie. The mermaid girl went to Gordy’s house and she watched her programme that was about sharks. She went into the bath. The mermaid put salt in the bath so it was like the sea.
By Jermaine
Shelly and Gordy were on the beach. Shelly came up with a plan to get a sister. She wrote a letter. Then she saw a mermaid then they were sisters. Then Coral missed her family. Sandy left a note – “please please come home Coral.” Then Sandy came to live with Coral.
By Alesha
Shelly and Gordy went to the beach. At the beach she wrote a letter at the seashore and she saw a mermaid. She always wanted a sister and then they threw a bottle in the sea and then a mermaid found the bottle. Then she got out of the sea. Then she missed her family and the she found a bottle from her brother and then she was happy. Then he came and joined in their family.
By Desharn
Wow, these stories are great. What brilliant writers you have in Room 1. It is so cool that I can read them here in London.
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From Jermaine's Auntie Viv.